RE: THE PERFECT WIN

Your entry for the prompt is good. Your coach turned out to be right after that disappointing game you lost because of unfair officiation. It's good you guys picked on the words of your coach and determined to win the next game.

A couple of things about your post: Your write-up would look better if your used proper punctuation. For example you omitted adding quotations were necessary. I was sorta confused at first.

Thanks for writing.