RE: 12 April 2025, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt (Day 2704) | Prompt: walk this way please (por aquí, por favor)
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The twist at the end is brilliant. The phrase 'Walk this way, please' takes on a sinister tone with the reveal of Executioner Trixter Shadowmond. Well-crafted and engaging, it leaves me wanting more. Great job capturing a thrilling scene in just 50 words!"
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Yep, just 50 words I attempted to capture the scene. I'm pleased you liked how it ended. It seemed as though he were just going on a trip with his luggage. He's a shift one trying to escape from the authorities.
I appreciate you stopping by and viewing my story. Thanks for your engagement and support. Take care.
!LADY