The Witch In Patmos

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A month after the exorcism of the witch in Patmos, the spirit wandered about looking for a place to dwell. Out of the four provinces it traveled to, it found a prince in Kos, who was a warrior and had sinister desires, a perfect victim to use, the spirit thought as it possessed the young prince, making him all powerful, but tasty for blood as the spirit sought for vengeance.

Amir, the prince, sat before his mirror, admiring himself when Suddenly a surge of strength enveloped him. He knew something had entered him but the feeling was good. He laughed instinctively and stared at himself in the mirror. His eyes turned milky, he stroked his beard several times and smiled at himself in the mirror

"A new dawn has come" he heard himself echo while holding a symbol of a cross. "I'm coming for you" he tightened his fist on the cross and lit up a candle as echoes of his laughter filled the room.

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The wonders of his might spread abroad. Nations trembled at the mention of his name. It was what he had always wanted, power and glory and the witch in Patmos was ready to give him all, but all he wanted was revenge on Priests , he was never going to rest until he saw the fall of churches. Whenever Amir is possessed he goes after the church. Even though he was a lover of God, he wondered why his vexations were targeted at the church. For twenty years he tormented the church, until an exorcist came, who knew the old witch in Patmos.


This is in response to the Contest by freewritehouse. It's still active for participation



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Congratulations, you received an ecency upvote through the curator @ahmedhayat. Keep spreading love through ecency

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Most interesting take. Now I need more of the story though :) This was just the trailer :D

Cheers from #dreemerforlife

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Smile, yeah, more like a trailer. Continue in the next prompt

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Not me scrolling down to see if it’s my network or the story has ended just like that…but ehhh? This was interesting to read, I’m just wondering what’s with him and churches at all

#dreemerforlife

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The spirit was exorcized, so he wants revenge. I like to leave suspense sometimes

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Don’t be doing that o😂

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Give me flat tummy tea and I'll reconsider this 😆

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Haha, what an end, why did you leave us hanging?
🤣🤣 this was a beautiful read.

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What a beautiful and short freewrite. Perhaps the new exorcist, knowing the old witch would save Amir.
#dreemport

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Yeah, but sometimes it's dangerous, because the spirit also know them

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You need to finish this story oo and tell us why he despised the priests so much as to do them harm.
The image fitted the possessed Amir very well.

#dreemerforlife

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The first exorcism was done by a priest and that's where his vexations began

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This was a beautiful read but I was aching to see more.

Thank you for sharing.

#dreemerforlife

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Sorry dear rukkie, I had to keep many in suspense

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The old which might have had a very good reason to go after the churches. After all the terrible things they did!

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