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They were running. The howling winds and bending trees were clarion calls that signified that humans ought not to be out of their comfy beds in the midst of such a storm. The couple knew this, yet they ran. No one knew why they were running with a bundle in the man’s arms.

“Malik! You dimwit, where are you going in the storm? That too with your wife.”

“Always knew he had some screws loose.”

“Let them be. The deranged lot belong together.”

Malik paid no attention to the malicious comments from the villagers. They had never liked him and there was no reason to start now. He clutched his wife’s hand tighter and together they ran to the man at the edge of the village. The man that would solve all their problems. At least they hoped he would. Malik stole occasional glances at the bundle in his arms and each time he gazed into the sleeping face of his newborn daughter, his zeal was renewed and he sped up.

They got to the place they sought and before they stepped any closer into the windowless hut, a voice called from within.

“Malik, son of the hunter. Why is it you bring a child that should be safe in her mother’s arms to my abode when the heavens wrath is kindled.”

Malik and his wife, drenched in the rain and shivering from the cold were astounded. Malik opened his mouth to speak, but his body shook with the chill.

“Come on in!” the medicine man yelled at them. When they had settled by the fire, he took the sleeping child in his arms.

“Ah! You got the gift and the curse of the heavens.”

“Gift?”

“Curse?”

The couple asked in unison. But the medicine man continued like no one had spoken, smiling toothlessly at the baby. “I didn’t think I’ll see this in my lifetime.” After a long minute of admiring the baby in his arms, he turned a stern face to the couple.

“Yes, you’ve been bestowed with a gift from the heavens. But, it’s also a curse in its own right.”

Malik looked at his wife who was already beginning to sob quietly and turned a desperate look to the medicine man. “Explain what you mean, Wise one.”

“She was born on the night of the heaven’s wrath. She is no normal child. Hasten never to let a drop of tear fall from this one’s eyes, never to be filled with wrath or grief. Each time a drop of tear falls from her eyes, there shall be lightning. And there shall be chaos.”

Mustering courage that he lacked, Malik asked hesitantly. “And the gift?”

“For the remainder of her life, your household shall always be in health.”

Malik took the baby into his arms and whispered to her. “I shall call you Zaya. For you are the heaven’s gift to us.” As if on cue, there was a flash of lightning followed by booming thunder. And the couple saw a tear stream down their daughter’s face.

“That’s the last of the rain.” The medicine man said. “Take her and may the heavens be with you.”


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Sixteen Years Later

“Mama, I promise I’ll just be out for a few hours.” An excited Zaya begged.

Shalom sent a worried look her daughter’s way from her hardly aging face. “I don’t want you stressed, my love. Are you sure you want to spend today with him? Your birthday of all days?”

“Mama, I promise it’s fine. Sandy likes me. I think he’ll ask me out today.”

“Okay, you know the drill. Be positive at all times, and at the first sign of stress –”

“Leave the place immediately.” Zaya interrupted impatiently. “I know that Mama. You’ve said that like a million times.”

“Leave the girl alone, sweetheart. She’s been fine all along. What could go wrong now?” Shalom turned a scathing look to her husband but refrained from speaking anymore.

“You’re the best Dada. Can I leave now?”

“Yes, my stormy ball.”

Zaya sprinted to the lake where she was to meet with her four-year crush. She didn’t know why he insisted that they met by the lake but she supposed he wanted a romantic atmosphere, away from everyone. She couldn’t help the dreamy sigh that left her lips.

Zaya sat on the boulder by the lake as she waited. Twenty minutes passed and her smile didn’t dwindle. He was probably making last-minute preparations to make her birthday special. However, an hour passed. Then two, and her smile began to wane. She knew she was getting stressed but she couldn’t bring herself to leave just yet.

Why was he late?

After an hour more, Zaya knew she had been stood up. She took her satchel and walked calmly with an unreadable face not to her house, but to the lad that had just stood her up. As she approached Sandy’s house, she heard the music and the laughter. Loud and blaring.

The sky began to darken but Zaya paid it no mind as her fists clenched. Her parents, however, from their home, saw the sky too and sprinted to find their daughter like their life was on the line. And in a way, it was. Meanwhile, Zaya knocked frantically on the door before her. And when no one opened, she began to pound on it.

The music stopped and she heard someone from inside say, “It’s probably the freak.”

Her breath stopped as a smug Sandy opened the door.

“What do you want?”

“What do I want?” Zaya asked aghast. “We were supposed to meet by the lake. It’s my…” she paused. “It’s my birthday.”

Loud guffaws from everywhere was the reply. Sandy turned a mocking grin at her.

“Why? Why on earth would I go on a date with a freak like you?”

“Please don’t say that. I thought you liked me.”

“No one likes a white-haired freak. Have you looked in the mirror? You look like a ghost. A freak, that’s what you are.”

“Please, Sandy. Don’t say that.” Zaya pleaded, tears brimming in her eyes. The sky was completely dark now and a strong gust of wind blew. But her oblivious tormentor continued.

“That’s it. Cry. Everyone, the freak is about to cry.” He called out.

Zaya knelt like she had been struck. Behind her, the running footsteps of her parents came.

“What did you do to her?!” Malik bellowed, shaking the teenage boy furiously.

“I didn’t mean…” the frightened boy started.

“Mama,” Zaya called out. “He said I’m a freak. I’m a freak right?”

“No, baby you’re not.” Shalom pleaded desperately, but Zaya was already zoning out.

“I’m a freak.” She whispered. “I’m a freak.” She looked to the sky that was already pouring rain and with a sinking realization that she was the cause. She bent her head, her parents’ pleas a distant echo to her and let her brimming tears flow.

For a second, there was a great calm. Everyone and everything was still. Then, like a snap of the finger, all hell broke loose.

Jhymi🖤


This is my entry to the The Inkwell's Monthly Fiction Prompt.




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Oyyyy! That hook is torture🥲. But I totally pictured it. Zara with white hair born on the night of a storm. Hehe. Reminds me a lot of someone. Beautiful writing.

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Thank you dear, I appreciate it.
Who does it remind you of?

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I am just wondering what would happen if she continuously cry. I was curious to know about it.
Anyway, it was an interesting story and I enjoyed reading it. .
!PIZZA

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I'm sure it would be very chaotic.
Thank you, and I hope you have a most wonderful day.🌺

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Thank you so much @voice.direct. I really didn't know what to do. I'm to stake all my earnings to my account right?

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Yes, From @jhymi to @jhymi.

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Yeah, I've taken note of that. Thank you once again.✨

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Oh.... What a wonderful arc.

I'm sure all hell will break on them all. The consequence of a fake affection from Sandy

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Yeah, that's true. I'm glad you liked the story dear.🤗

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What great power Zaya has! Her fury and the storms she can produce are a metaphor for the storms of the soul when a love rejects us. Sandy has no idea of the great blessing she is losing and the mistake of humiliating the daughter of heaven.

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Beautiful writing, Tess. Great opening hook! Unrequited love can be so heartbreaking - and the extra layers of cruelty here are enough to push anyone over the edge. I wonder if the daughter of Heaven will survive the chaos to overcome her weakness one day. !LUV

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Thank you Sam!! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.🌺❤️

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Gripping! I was immersed in your story such that I was shocked at this point,

“I didn’t mean…” the frightened boy started.

The nerve of the silly boy to play pretend! 😄 Poor Zaya. She deserved better. Your story is imaginative and unique. Well done! !LADY 🙂

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😭 it's so good!!
Please more of this.
Vivid story of how hell broke loose.
I want Sandy to be beaten with guilt that the whole village is flooding and burning because of him. 🤭

Ah. I'm such lover of drama, eh?
Thank you for sharing this.

Made my way here through #dreemport and I'm #dreemerforlife

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Oh... this comment made me smile so much. You wouldn't believe it. I'm so glad you loved the story. It's pleasing to get wonderful feedback from my readers.
Sandy is such a rascal. I'm sure he got what he deserved.
So lovely to have you dear.🤗

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So enjoyable to read, from the begin inning, the flow, and the end part, you are an excellent writer.

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This is such a heartwarming comment. Thank you so much @glorydee. I appreciate it.🌺

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Oh my God!! 😍
Your story got me glued to my screen till I saw the final full stop 😂.
A daughter of heaven with a gift and curse. Her parents tried their best to ensure she was happy and positive at all times only for one rascal to come and cause her tears 😭.
Zaya deserves better, someone that would cherish and value her for who she is ❤️.

I popped in through #Dreemport.
#dreemerforlife

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Yes o. She does. I wish I'd encountered that guy let me knock his head.😂
Her parents were the true heroes in this story. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading dearest Nkem. It's a huge pleasure to have you.🤗🤗

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Oh my!
As I read the story, I could picture the scenes in my mind, and it felt like I was watching a movie.
I don't know how you fiction writers do it but I always feel happy reading amazing stories like this one.
Although the story seems like there might just be a part two, it ended just as it should.
Zaya is indeed unique. When I read the part where there was a great calm everywhere, I thought Zaya wouldn't shed a tear since she is aware of her powers. The real freak is Sandy, he is so silly. Why ask her to meet up with him only to disappoint? Crazy
Well done.
I came here through #dreemport #dreemerforlife

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I don't hope to encounter mean guys like that because even if there will be tears, it won't be coming from me, that's for sure.
It means a lot that you love and appreciate the story dear. I'm always eager to know the thoughts of my readers. Looking forward to more of your thoughtful comments.🤗

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Was that a breakfast story I just read? Lol😄
What the guy did was wrong. He shouldn't have hurt her on such a day. I'm feeling for her.

The end though 🥱

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Say na breakfast story.
What's with you and the last emoji these days?

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How did hell break loose???? What happened????🙁😭

Girlll, with this level of skill, you should be working on your first novel. That's if you haven't already published one already.
I did not want the story to end at all. Your writing is impeccable and I love the way you build up suspense and arouse emotions from your reader.

Well done dear🌹

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Dearest Zitalove, with all these praises, I pray my head doesn't get bigger than my body. This glowing comment leaves me blushing dear. I don't know if I'll ever write a novel. I'm not that good finishing up stories but I'm glad you enjoyed it regardless. Thank you so much !luv🌺🤗

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Ouch... How I wish your pen tilted a little bit to giving Zaya a Happy ending.

Once again, you've showed quite a good display of skill... A great imaginative piece I must say

#dreemerforlife

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Gosh, this is a great story! I was glued all through till to the end. Zaya is a good blessing but she can also be a great curse when the circumstance presents itself.

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Thank you so much for the warming review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.🌺

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Wow,This is an awesome attempt to the entry @jhymi ,well detailed setting and a nice dialogue,the action is second to none. This story made my day. Much love 😘

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Thank you so much @seunruth. Your beautiful comment warms my heart as well. I'm super glad you loved it and I hope to see you around often. Have a wonderful day.🌺

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Loved it. It is a great story. I am inspired. Nonetheless, I was surprised to here that her hairs were white.

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Platinum blonde is more to it.
I'm glad you loved the story dear.

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