RE: 6 February 2025, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2639 (Part 5) | Prompt: a nice illusion
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Another @kemmyb masterful, analytical, and thoughtful comment on my story. Thanks so much for stopping by. I know you're busy. I totally forgot to add the previous chapters, so will do a collection at the end. What a joy it was to wake up to your lovely analysis of my story. The child is a mystery. Ophelia IS a sharp-tongued character indeed. With her cane as a weapon, she's a force to be dealt with. I wasn't sure if I wanted to insert her into the case of solving the mystery. But I knew Nathan couldn't handle it alone. After all, he DIDN'T BELIEVE! And she added much needed flavor to Nathan's dryness.
I think the experience of him opening himself up to others and the mysteries of the universe will have a lasting effect on him. It's usually that way when one "goes through some things" with another person. At least I hope so in his case. He's a stubborn one, though.
I'm gonna take several days to wind it up so that I can capture the true meaning of Olivia's presence. She's important to the story, and I haven't delved into that yet. I do want to wrap this one up nicely before moving on to another story that needed my attention.
I appreciate so much your input, engagement, and support of my work. Thanks so much. Take care and have a good start to your weekend.
!LADY