Something To Celebrate - A Special Memorial Day Story for | Prompt: A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words

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The sun poured through my window as I woke this morning. Another day has dawned, bringing with it new, challenges, but also dreams and aspirations. I know I shouldn't, but I peruse the newspaper for word of any former acquaintances I served with, then toss it aside. Death, destruction, and problems overshadow the best of society. My day is planned, and I'm looking forward to a thoughtful and peaceful outcome.

A car pulls into my driveway. I take a deep breath and exhale slowly. Today is going to be a good one, I pray silently.

Stomping up the driveway, I frown as I watch my dad pull his silver hair back from his forehead before he reaches my front door. I imagine his shoulders heaving, priming himself for battle.

I reposition my location and sit at the dining table, still a bit annoyed from our previous conversations. His persistence that I join a group of like-minded individuals dealing with loss will be a topic he feels he must approach until he obtains the desired result.

I've been waiting for today's discussion. A parent is supposed to support a child in all things positive, but especially in my case after the ordeal and lengthy recovery I endured from the numerous surgeries.

"Kyle, I don't think you're ready to venture out into the public. People realize and sympathize, but they don't want to see up close. Reminders are too painful." My dad sighs, then inches closer to me. "I'm worried about you, son."

"Don't be. And I can't allow what others think to sway my judgment or lessen my opinion of myself. Prostheses don't define me. I'm better now than when I left for duty. I may not be whole in body, but I am in spirit and purpose. If you want to accompany me to the Memorial Day function, I'm heading out to the celebration in honor of a few of my comrades that I watched lose their lives. They'll never get the opportunity for a second chance. And I'm not going to squander mine."

Dad rises. His hands touch metal as he grips my shoulders. But what he said next pierces my soul.

"Don't you want to put on long sleeves?" he probes in a shaky voice.

If it were possible for metal to tense up, I would have felt it. I attempt to respond in a manner not reflecting my chagrin. "My choice of attire is perfectly fine, dad. I'm not ashamed," I reply evenly.

I continue, attempting to steer the conversation away from my disfigurement as he views it.

"In fact, dad, later, I have my first date in three years since my return. I've been talking online to this beautiful, amazing woman. We have our first meeting tonight. I put myself out there, dad. I have a pleasing personality and feel I'm a decent person. If others can't see my worth, then I would have fought for this country to no avail."

"Is she handicapped also?" he blurts.

"Is that a prerequisite for dating me? For God's sake, dad, have you no faith in my ability to attract a woman?"

"I just don't want you to be disappointed." Dad turns away and stares out the window.

"How can I be disappointed? I woke up this morning. I am alive, and I gave thanks. I'm gong to the Memorial service for my fellow brave soldiers who can't sit and talk with their loved ones. Anything after this day forward is a plus and a blessing."

I turn and stare relentlessly at my dad. I'm better at it than he. If only my mom were here, I thought for the first time in a long while.

After several long seconds of silence, my dad returns to his seat and begins to speak of pleasant things happening in the world, also agreeing to accompany me to the Memorial Day service in our city.

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Welcome back to my freewrite prompt story for this week. The photo that is the subject of the story spoke to me about a person who has had some type of accident.

Describe what you see.
I see a young man who has encountered some type of accident in which he now has a robotic arm or some type of advanced prosthetic.

Describe what you feel.
I feel the young man probably sustained his injury during a tour of duty in the armed services. A somber look on his face, he's probably adjusting slowly to life after the incident and having to deal with issues.

Write a story or poem about what you think is going on. I leave with you my story for: A Picture is Worth A Thousand Words - 6/4/22.

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For your convenience, I have included below a Spanish translation from DeepL for "Something To Celebrate - A Special Memorial Day Story" - Freewrite: 6/4/22 | Prompt: A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words.

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Algo que celebrar - Una historia especial para el Día de los Caídos

Bienvenidos de nuevo a mi historia de libre escritura de esta semana. La foto que es el tema de la historia me habló de una persona que ha tenido algún tipo de accidente.

Describa lo que ve
Veo a un joven que ha sufrido algún tipo de accidente en el que ahora tiene un brazo robótico o algún tipo de prótesis avanzada.

Describe lo que sientes
I feel the young man probably sustained his injury during a tour of duty in the armed services. A somber look on his face, he's probably adjusting slowly to life after the incident and having to deal with issues.

Escribe una historia o un poema sobre lo que crees que está pasando. Os dejo mi historia para:
A Picture is Worth A Thousand Words - 6/4/22.

El sol entraba por la ventana cuando me desperté esta mañana. Ha amanecido un nuevo día, con nuevos retos, pero también sueños y aspiraciones. Sé que no debería, pero ojeo el periódico en busca de noticias de antiguos conocidos con los que serví, y luego lo tiro a un lado. La muerte, la destrucción y los problemas eclipsan lo mejor de la sociedad. Mi día está planeado, y espero un resultado reflexivo y pacífico.

Un coche entra en mi casa. Respiro hondo y exhalo lentamente. Hoy va a ser un buen día, rezo en silencio.

Subo por el camino de entrada y frunzo el ceño al ver cómo mi padre se aparta el pelo plateado de la frente antes de llegar a la puerta. Imagino sus hombros agitados, preparándose para la batalla.

Reubico mi posición y me siento en la mesa del comedor, todavía un poco molesta por nuestras conversaciones anteriores. Su insistencia en que me una a un grupo de personas con ideas afines que se enfrentan a la pérdida será un tema que siente que debe abordar hasta obtener el resultado deseado.

He estado esperando la discusión de hoy. Se supone que un padre debe apoyar a un hijo en todo lo que sea positivo, pero especialmente en mi caso después del calvario y la larga recuperación que sufrí tras las numerosas operaciones.

"Kyle, no creo que estés listo para aventurarte en público. La gente se da cuenta y simpatiza, pero no quiere ver de cerca. Los recordatorios son demasiado dolorosos". Mi padre suspira y se acerca a mí. "Estoy preocupado por ti, hijo".

*"No lo hagas. Y no puedo permitir que lo que piensen los demás influya en mi juicio o disminuya la opinión que tengo de mí misma. Las prótesis no me definen. Soy mejor ahora que cuando salí de servicio. Puede que no esté entero de cuerpo, pero sí de espíritu y propósito. Si quieres acompañarme a la función del Día de los Caídos, iré a la celebración en honor de algunos de mis camaradas a los que vi perder la vida. Nunca tendrán la oportunidad de una segunda oportunidad. Y yo no voy a desperdiciar la mía".

Papá se levanta. Sus manos tocan el metal cuando me agarra por los hombros. Pero lo que dice a continuación me atraviesa el alma.

"¿No quieres ponerte manga larga?", me pregunta con voz temblorosa.

Si fuera posible que el metal se tensara, lo habría sentido. Intento responder de un modo que no refleje mi disgusto. *"Mi elección de atuendo está perfectamente bien, papá. No me avergüenzo", respondo con firmeza.

Continúo, intentando desviar la conversación de mi desfiguración tal y como él la ve.

*"De hecho, papá, más tarde tengo mi primera cita en tres años desde mi regreso. He estado hablando por Internet con una mujer preciosa e increíble. Tenemos nuestro primer encuentro esta noche. Me he expuesto, papá. Tengo una personalidad agradable y siento que soy una persona decente. Si otros no pueden ver mi valía, entonces habría luchado por este país en vano".

"¿También es minusválida?", suelta.

¿Es un requisito para salir conmigo? Por el amor de Dios, papá, ¿no tienes fe en mi capacidad para atraer a una mujer? ".

*"¿Cómo puedo estar decepcionado? Esta mañana me he levantado. Estoy vivo y he dado gracias. Voy al servicio conmemorativo por mis valientes compañeros que no pueden sentarse y hablar con sus seres queridos. Todo lo que pase a partir de hoy es una ventaja y una bendición".

Me doy la vuelta y miro fijamente a mi padre. Se me da mejor que a él. Si al menos mi madre estuviera aquí, pienso por primera vez en mucho tiempo.

Tras varios largos segundos de silencio, mi padre vuelve a su asiento y empieza a hablar de cosas agradables que ocurren en el mundo, aceptando también acompañarme al servicio del Día de los Caídos en nuestra ciudad.

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If translation included, I use DeepL to assist my readers.
Thanks for your patience an understanding
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El inglés es mi lengua materna.
Si se incluye traducción, utilizo DeepL para ayudar a mis lectores.
Gracias por su paciencia y comprensión.

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A parent is supposed to support a child in all things positive

But too much support is detrimental to the relationship.

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Hello @walindo. Yes, too much support can be detrimental, but if the project the child undertakes is a positive one and deemed to be of benefit, then the parent can choose to help.

Thanks for your engagement and support.

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Beautiful and sad story of a disabled person, bravo for this very gripping text

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Hello @cyboule. Thanks so much for your visit. I'm pleased you found my story thoughtful in context. Yes, our veterans much be supported and encouraged.

I appreciate your support. Take care.

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"Is she handicapped also?" he blurts.

🤣 I couldn't help laughing at the Dad's comment. That was insensitive of him! I'm a little disappointed at his talk and mindset. He's concerned about his son, no doubt, but he sounded patronising. This is the more reason why we shouldn't let society (or what others think) dictate our lives.

Kyle is determined not to hide his injuries—they are a symbol of his sacrifice and survival—and I stand with him on this! Yes,they are a reminder of the war and the losses that come with it but sometimes, we have to look beyond that and see hope instead. I'm glad his Dad respects his stance on this matter and accompanies him to the event.

It's not easy to put oneself out there after what Kyle had been through. I admire war veterans for their sacrifices and believe they should be given the best treatment, medically and socially. You capture the resilience and faith that come with healing through vivid descriptions and heartfelt dialogues. Well done.

Thanks for sharing this lovely and touching story. Have a wonderful day. !PIMP !LADY

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Hello @kemmyb. By the attitude of the father, I can only suspect he did not serve. Else, he would know the love, encouragement, and support that is needed, in addition to all other benefits due these brave individuals. Sadly, today our society falls short of providing the needs in one or more areas.

It's difficult enough in regular life and in good times to live one's life without struggles. Those who, despite setbacks and personal affliction, can find joy, contentment, and hope for a future should be commended and supported to the fullest. I hope this dad learns a lesson from his son on many levels. It's not often it happens, but there's hope.

Thanks so much for your visit and insightful analysis of my story as always. I appreciate it, your engagement, and support.

Take care.

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It takes time to get used to... Well, what exactly? The son sounds mentally healthy (already a miracle) and we all are used to prostheses not to mention the six-dollar man and woman.
How great must it be if your son discovers his abilities weight more than the beauty some seem to strive to.
.greetings and thanks for the superb read.
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Apparently the father didn't serve his country. He would definitely understand his son better. As the son said, he wished his mother was alive. So we can infer that he and his mother had a more deeper connection and understanding.

And you are right in that the son appears more mentally healthy than his dad.

But to think that his son couldn't attract a woman because of a disability is totally absurd and nonsense. It's really degrading to a man's pride in himself and self-worth. I remember my dad, who was a double amputee.

Thanks so much for your visit and kind compliment for my story @wakeupkitty. I appreciate it.

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I am afraid it's what many parents think even if it comes to smaller disabbilities like glasses, skin diseases, asthma, you name it. Most frequently said to girls. If you ask me no one is perfect especially not those using botix and more trying to hide.
To me, it works best to be the ugly yourself no surprises.

I do believe the average woman goes more for the inside than the average man but it can be it has to do with the world I'm raised in. If it comes to it we all prefer good looks, perfect even if we are far from it ourselves.

Thanks for the impressive entry.
Blessings to you.
@wakeupkitty

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I feel it has to do with finding perfection when it's lacking in ourselves. We should know there is no such thing as a perfect person, both inside and out. Degrading things are said to females more often about their external appearance I believe. It's probably why so many look for enhancements.

I appreciate your thoughtfulness and insight @wakeupkitty about my story. Take care and have a good rest of your week.

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A great Sunday/week to you. Thanks for always finding the time to read and respond.
🍀❤️

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You are welcome. Currently going through a mini crisis with a family member, so my time and attention is waning.

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