The Gifted Grifter - Freewrite: 6/30/24 | Prompt: A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words
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I couldn't sit and take the verbal assault my father hurled at me from across his desk. So, I stood with arms folded in front of the elegant bookcase in his office staring into his blistering face. With knees weak from the barrage of insults, I leaned against the edge of the cabinet and listened, swallowing hard the lumps of coal listing my transgressions against the family.
"It's been a year. Time to move on. He's an upstanding young man, intelligent with a bright future. Someone I would be proud to call "son-in-law". Given the mess you made of your first choice, you should be grateful polite society still looks favorably upon our family."
My father, shipping tycoon Joshua McKendrick, shoved the kraft folder toward the edge of his desk. Knowing this was my last chance to protest, with my nose flaring and brows together, I shot an angry glance at the photo clipped on top.
"I can choose my own!" My mouth caught in mid air as he didn't allow me to finish.
"That grifter from some filthy alley you hauled from the lower end of MidValley! If that's your best, then I failed as a father. It nearly claimed your mother the mess you made of our preparations for your debut."
A baby for a board of director seat at a prosperous shipping empire. A fair exchange for an upstanding young man with a bright future ahead. How intelligent his decision, I couldn't yet gauge.
Bile rose up as I walked slowly to the car.
Once inside, I placed the folder on the passenger seat and glanced at my future husband. My father's stinging words coursed through my body. But they couldn't find and remove the love for Dwight from my heart.
Memories flooded and rushed to my eyes as tears fell. The last four years were difficult with Dwight. Stubborn, we married against my family's blessing.
Our most precious moments were cuddling near the fireplace where he'd sketch me in the glow of the embers that also reflected in his fiery strands. Or our escapes to MidValley to visit the market vendors whose eyes grew wide after payments for their wares. Then we'd stop at the nearby donation facility and gift the items.
The idyllic version didn't last. An eerie cloud descended. We fought constantly. Dwight had no higher education to tackle the demands my father placed upon him. He struggled to stay afloat, often drinking heavily. One night four years later, Dwight didn't return home. My father rushed my divorce, on grounds of abandonment.
I dried my tears and cranked the car. Dwight didn't belong in my world; nor I in his. But the lessons he taught me about life on the other side of polite society would last a lifetime.
I married my new husband without the flutters of love.
A year later, a restless me emerged. I couldn't focus on my philanthropy work or home. Irritation set in as I'd go about my days on the verge of melancholy. That weekend, I dressed Gabriella and asked Millard to accompany us to the vendor market across town. He didn't understand why, but could refuse me nothing.
"Mommy, come look. That man over there drew my picture, and I didn't pose for it," my daughter, out of breath, rushing to my side, finally spat out.
"Slow down, Gabby. You'll tumble me."
The man in the stall selling portraits watched as I approached.
One look at the oil painting on canvas was all I needed. Gabby with the blue ballerina dress. The violin he'd chosen for when she grew into it. She would attempt to hold it between her small jaw and collarbone, then try to draw the bow across the strings.
The color of her tresses matched his, except a few gray areas had developed around his temples. Six years had aged him twenty. The long straggly beard and thinning hair atop a ruddy face. Thin to the point of frail, his sunken cheeks told of skipped meals. Or an illness perhaps?
The night he didn't return, I prayed for this moment. Having rehearsed the confrontation like riding a ferris wheel until exhausted, I now waited for the hurt and anger to rise.
Instead, remorse and pity hovered in my throat, momentarily disabling my voice. It was a good thing Gabby was gushing at the canvas because tears welled up as I struggled to speak.
"How much for the painting, sir?" While in my pocket, I willed my shaky hands to calm down as I searched for a ten dollar bill he requested. I paused, snapped the pocket shut, then reached for my checkbook. I handed Dwight the thousand dollar check, and he accepted.
As I extended my hand, Dwight shaky hand held the check for a moment. He scoured my face. His gaze moved to my bulging stomach, then he released my hand. He nodded as I requested his signature and date, along with a message to Gabriella on the inside of the canvas.
I smiled, turned, and extended my hands to Gabby and Millard. As we walked away from the farmer's market, my heart confirmed that Dwight and our union was destined. I gave him a glimpse into a would he could never attain. He showed me a world I would never understand.
I knew Dwight had discovered himself and would be content in his world.
I could be content now knowing he left me with the most precious gift. A beautiful daughter. A child musical prodigy and excellent student.
I let escape a long sigh. My future lay ahead with a husband I initially judged too harshly and was now growing fond of, together with a new baby boy to look forward to.
Welcome back to my freewrite prompt story for this week. The photo that is the subject of the story spoke to me about a young girl focused on playing the violin.
Describe what you see.
A young girl with long, beautiful auburn hair, sits on a chair. Dressed in blue taffeta dress, she is barefoot. Her expression is somber.
Describe what you feel.
The young girl is diligently practicing her violin. The stark wall behind her with a coat of paint on the floor suggests a freshly painted room for her to practice.
Write a story or poem about what you think is going on. I leave with you my story for: A Picture is Worth A Thousand Words - 6/30/24.
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For your convenience, I have included below a translation from DeepL for - Freewrite: 6/30/124 | Prompt: A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words.
! [The Gifted Grifter]
El estafador superdotado
SourceBienvenidos de nuevo a mi historia de libre escritura de esta semana. La foto que es el tema de la historia me habló de una joven centrada en tocar el violín.
Describa lo que ve
Una joven con una larga y hermosa melena castaña está sentada en una silla. Lleva un vestido azul de tafetán y va descalza. Su expresión es sombría.Describe lo que sientes
La joven practica diligentemente con su violín. La austera pared que hay tras ella, con una capa de pintura en el suelo, sugiere una habitación recién pintada para que practique.Escribe una historia o un poema sobre lo que crees que está pasando. Os dejo mi historia para:
A Picture is Worth A Thousand Words - 6/30/24.No podía sentarme y aguantar el ataque verbal que mi padre me lanzaba desde el otro lado de su mesa. Así que me quedé de pie con los brazos cruzados frente a la elegante librería de su despacho mirándole fijamente a la cara. Con las rodillas débiles por el aluvión de insultos, me apoyé en el borde del mueble y escuché, tragando con fuerza los trozos de carbón que enumeraban mis transgresiones contra la familia.
"Ha pasado un año. Es hora de seguir adelante. Es un joven honrado, inteligente y con un futuro brillante. Alguien a quien estaría orgulloso de llamar yerno. Dado el desastre que hiciste con tu primera elección, deberías estar agradecido de que la sociedad educada aún vea con buenos ojos a nuestra familia".
Mi padre, el magnate naviero Joshua McKendrick, empujó la carpeta kraft hacia el borde de su escritorio. Sabiendo que era mi última oportunidad de protestar, con la nariz respingona y las cejas juntas, lancé una mirada furiosa a la foto recortada en la parte superior.
*Me quedé con la boca abierta cuando no me dejó terminar.
"Ese timador de algún callejón mugriento que sacaste de la parte baja de MidValley! Si esa es tu mejor elección, entonces he fracasado como padre. Casi se cobró tu madre el desastre que hiciste con nuestros preparativos para tu debut".
Un bebé por un puesto en la junta directiva de un próspero imperio naviero. Un intercambio justo por un joven honrado con un brillante futuro por delante. Todavía no podía calibrar lo inteligente de su decisión.
La bilis me subió mientras caminaba lentamente hacia el coche.
Una vez dentro, coloqué la carpeta en el asiento del copiloto y miré a mi futuro marido. Las palabras urticantes de mi padre me recorrieron el cuerpo. Pero no pudieron encontrar y eliminar de mi corazón el amor por Dwight.
Los recuerdos me inundaron y se precipitaron a mis ojos mientras caían las lágrimas. Los últimos cuatro años fueron difíciles con Dwight. Obstinados, nos casamos en contra de la bendición de mi familia.
Nuestros momentos más preciados eran acurrucados cerca de la chimenea donde él me dibujaba en el resplandor de las brasas que también se reflejaban en sus hebras ardientes. O nuestras escapadas a Midtown para visitar a los vendedores del mercado, cuyos ojos se abrían de par en par tras pagar por sus mercancías. Luego parábamos en el cercano centro de donaciones y regalábamos los artículos.
La versión idílica no duró. Una nube espeluznante descendió. Dwight no tenía estudios superiores para hacer frente a las exigencias que mi padre le imponía. Luchaba por mantenerse a flote, a menudo bebiendo en exceso. Una noche, cuatro años después, Dwight no volvió a casa. Mi padre precipitó mi divorcio, alegando abandono.
Me sequé las lágrimas y arranqué el coche. Dwight no pertenecía a mi mundo; ni yo al suyo. Pero las lecciones que me enseñó sobre la vida al otro lado de la sociedad educada durarían toda la vida.
Me casé con mi nuevo marido sin aleteos de amor.
Un año después, surgió un yo inquieto. No podía centrarme en mi trabajo filantrópico ni en casa. La irritación se apoderó de mí y me pasaba el día al borde de la melancolía. Aquel fin de semana vestí a Gabriella y le pedí a Millard que nos acompañara al mercado de vendedores de la otra punta de la ciudad. No entendía por qué, pero no podía negarme nada.
"Mami, ven a ver. Ese hombre de ahí me ha hecho un dibujo y yo no he posado para él", espetó finalmente mi hija, sin aliento, corriendo a mi lado.
"Más despacio, Gabby. Me vas a tumbar".
El hombre del puesto de venta de retratos observó cómo me acercaba.
Una mirada al óleo sobre lienzo fue todo lo que necesité. Gabby con el vestido azul de bailarina. El violín que había elegido para cuando le creciera. Ella intentaba sostenerlo entre su pequeña mandíbula y la clavícula, y luego intentaba tensar el arco sobre las cuerdas.
El color de sus mechones coincidía con el de él, salvo que le habían salido algunas canas alrededor de las sienes. Seis años le convertían en veinte. La larga barba desaliñada y el pelo ralo sobre un rostro rubicundo. Delgado hasta la fragilidad, sus mejillas hundidas delataban comidas omitidas. ¿O tal vez una enfermedad?
La noche que no volvió, recé por este momento. Tras haber ensayado la confrontación como si montara en una noria hasta quedar exhausta, ahora esperaba que surgieran el dolor y la ira.
En lugar de eso, el remordimiento y la lástima se agolparon en mi garganta, inutilizándome momentáneamente la voz. Menos mal que Gabby se deshacía en lágrimas mientras yo me esforzaba por hablar.
"¿Cuánto por el cuadro, señor? " Mientras en mi bolsillo, deseaba que mis temblorosas manos se calmaran mientras buscaba el billete de diez dólares que me pedía. Hice una pausa, cerré el bolsillo y saqué la chequera. Le entregué a Dwight el cheque de mil dólares y él lo aceptó.
Cuando extendí la mano, Dwight sostuvo el cheque un momento. Me miró a la cara. Su mirada se dirigió a mi vientre abultado y luego me soltó la mano. Asintió cuando le pedí su firma y la fecha, junto con un mensaje para Gabby en el interior del lienzo.
Sonreí, me di la vuelta y tendí la mano a Gabriella y Millard. Mientras nos alejábamos del mercado agrícola, mi corazón me confirmó que Dwight y nuestra unión estaban destinados. Le di un vistazo a un mundo que nunca podría alcanzar. Me mostró un mundo que nunca entendería.
Sabía que Dwight se había descubierto a sí mismo y que estaría contento en su mundo.
Ahora puedo estar contenta sabiendo que me dejó el regalo más preciado. Una hija preciosa. Una niña prodigio de la música y excelente estudiante.
Dejé escapar un largo suspiro. Mi futuro estaba por delante con un marido al que al principio juzgué con demasiada dureza y al que ahora estaba cogiendo cariño, junto con un nuevo bebé al que esperar.
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A touching story! Will Gabby ever know?
Her mother bought the painting for her, so I'm sure she will place it in her room and in time, she will know. Since she was only four when her father left, she didn't recognize him with his drastically changed appearance.
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What a poignant story! I feel this protagonist's emotional struggle with family pressures and her desire for love regardless of social class. Dwight would have been right for her but he wasn't 'strong' enough to survive in her world. Now, she must live with the memories of their good times together and Gabby has the painting to prove her father's love. A well-written and engaging story! Well done.
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Yes, @kemmyb, her desire to find love outweighed her dedication to their social standing. If only her choice of mate was of strong character, regardless of his education level, it could have worked out. But they would have had to move away from the social circle. In the end, they each took away valuable lessons from their relationship.
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How come great relationships are always killed by family and society. Can be she is satisfied and tells herself Dwight is happy in his world ( I wouldn't say so if I look at his face and aged 20 years instead of 6). Great she's fond of the forced upon husband but my heart goes to Dwight. That girl will need some answers soon enough.
A great story and reminder to not let go and if so dump the family.
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It took four years for Dwight to realize he couldn't operate in her world. He held on as long as he could. He abandoned his family. Whether he was enticed by her father or on his own, the one thing I felt he was culpable in was not telling his wife before he left. There is always another way to handle a situation.
His health would have deteriorated anyway as he resorted to abusing alcohol and drugs to cope. I feel that they both knew their match had little chance of surviving, especially since her family and the social circles they existed in were opposed to it. You are correct. At some point, the daughter will have to be told.
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How sad 😢 I wonder if either of them will ever truly move on?
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I doubt they will since they connected so deeply, but external and internal stressors forced each to chart their own course to happiness. I just hope their daughter will one day understand him walking away from the life he couldn't exist in, effectively walking away from her.
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I'm not sure if she will understand, unless her mom helps her to. Or maybe in another chance encounter, her dad is able to talk to her about it.
Great story, with some very complex problems :)
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