RE: Beyond The Thick Wall || Hive Book Club Contest. Lostintranslation.

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What a fascinating dystopian story! I admire female characters who stand out in stories like your Grim Shot. She's a tough gal and determined. Despite their conditioning to shut off emotions, she leads her team (thanks to Mack for showing them the way) to a better world! If I lived in the City and cross over the Wall, I'll never go back! 😄

Interesting words and you're spot on the translation. Nicely done and good luck in the contest. !PIMP 💕



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Me too! I love strong protagonist characters. I really had fun writing her character. If they had given up on Mack, they wouldn't have found the magical forest. Who would go back to such a city 😂😂. I wouldn't, ever!. I am glad you enjoyed reading my story. I appreciate your comment here. 😊

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