Hive Open Mic Week 226 / Come Back Home - Original Song By Kmichealson

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Hello Hive Open Mic community, it's week 226, my name is Kmichealson; and I'm glad to be participating this week.

I read about the theme of the week, and I composed an original afrobeat song titled 'Come Back Home'. The song talks about a man who treated his woman wrong, and she left him. He wishes and hopes that she comes back home to him, as he has changed his ways.

LYRICS -

INTRO:
O Na na na, O na na na,
O na na na..na, O na na na,

VERSE 1:
I know... that I wrong you,
It was never my intention,
O baby please forgive,
I was caught up in an old flame,
Since you left, things have not been the same,
I remember how you called my name,
I recall the day you crossed my lane,

HOOK:
Wherever you've gone, o baby please come back home,
Wherever you've gone, o baby please come back home,
Come back home oo (come back home),
Come back home hmm (come back home),

CHORUS:
Let me love you in the moment,
Let me love you in the (come back home)
Let me love you in the moment oo,
Love in the (come back home),
Let me love you in the moment,
Let me love you in the (come back home)
Let me love you in the moment oo,
Love in the (come back home), [2x]

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Hi Richard, nice to meet you and welcome back to the Hive Open Mic. Your song is really cool and the music track too. Did you make it yourself? Or is it a track you got and sang over it? I ask you this question because it is important to mention the creator of the track in your post by placing a link to the track itself.

On the other hand, I liked your attitude, my friend. You really enjoy music, that's obvious. I would like to suggest that you record your videos horizontally and remember that your voice should stand out more than the track since it is the one and should be the protagonist.

The Hive Open Mic themes end on Saturdays since on Sundays we announce the new theme, it is important that you keep that in mind. Finally, I also wanted to talk to you about the importance of the video thumbnails; try to vary them so that they are attractive to the users and therefore they visit and support you more.

Thank you for joining us and we hope to see you in this new week 🔥🔥🔥... a hug man 👍... You Fuc&%$ Rockkk!!! 👊😎🔥🎙️🎸🎶❤️🌟🍻💥💫💯

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