RE: Fiction: Imaginative disorder (Desorden imaginativo) [EN/ES]
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This story really got me with the twist ending. I thought it was really happening! But it turned out to be the child. There is very good pacing and action in this story. The imagery is imaginative and fun to read.
The pirate flag dances to the rhythm of the sea breeze, and the skull smiles waiting for the great fight for the most coveted treasure in the Caribbean.
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I'm glad you mentioned it. When I wrote the story, I did so with that intention, that the reader would immerse themselves in an adventure and at the end find themselves in the imagination of a child.
I really liked your comment, thank you for taking the time to read my story.
Happy day.