My entry for the FreeCompliments Art Contest: Soneto de un amor en oleaje/Sonnet of a love in waves

Saludos amigos de #FreeCompliments

Mi participación en el concurso, decidí hacerla mediante la presentación de un poema de mi autoría. En esta ocasión utilicé la estructura del soneto. Versos endecasílabos distribuidos en dos cuartetos que riman ABBA y dos tercetos que riman CDE.

La imagen corresponde a una foto que recién tomé, en el Museo de Cera de Cuba, ubicado en Bayamo. Granma.

El molde representa la figura de la poeta cubana: "Carilda Oliver Labra"
Mujer de las letras que escribió poesía erótica. Recuerdo sus versos " Me desordeno, amor, me desordeno"

Como homenaje a ella, comparto mis letras desde una posición sensual haciendo énfasis en las metáforas, donde cada palabra conecta con el deseo, el amor y la pasión.

Espero lo disfruten.

🌸🍀🌸🍀🌸🍀🌸🍀🌸🍀🌸🍀🌸🍀

Soneto de un amor en oleaje 🌹✍️

Amanece, y complazco tu mirada,
tu mirada febril que me condena
al gozo como bálsamo en la arena,
suspiros del rompiente su balada.

Un roce de caricia enajenada,
espíritu de fuego que encadena,
bautismo de la lengua, ola serena
que profana mis bordes, extasiada.

Se despierta tu oleaje, me salpica
y me aferro a ese torso que perfumas
mientras bebo del muérdago, bendigo.

Como mar que creciendo se duplica
llegan a ti mis huellas entre espumas,
recalan los sabores que persigo.



MY ENGLISH VERSION



My participation in the contest, I decided to do it through the presentation of a poem of my authorship.On this occasion I used the structure of the sonnet.Endecasyllable verses distributed in two quartets that rhyme abba and two thirds that riman cde.

The image corresponds to a photo that I just took, in the Cuba Museum of Cuba, located in Bayamo.Granma

The mold represents the figure of the Cuban poet: "Carilda Oliver Labra"
Woman of the letters who wrote a lot of erotic poetry.I remember his verses "I snatch, love, I snatch"

As a tribute to her, I share my lyrics from a sensual position emphasizing metaphors, where each word connects with desire, love and passion.

I hope you enjoy it.

🌸🍀🌸🍀🌸🍀🌸🍀🌸🍀🌸🍀🌸🍀

Sonnet of a love in waves 🌹✍️

Dawn, and I please your gaze,
Your feverish look that condemns
me to joy as a balm in the sand,
sighs of the breakdown his ballad.

A damn caress,
Fire spirit that chains,
Baptism of the tongue, wave serene
That profane my edges, ecstatic.

Your waves wake up, I splash
and I cling to that torso that you perfume
While I drink from the Merdago, I bless.

As a sea that growing is doubled
My footprints between foams come to you,
The flavors that I pursue.

I thank everyone for getting to my profile, and leaving a comment that helps me strengthen creative work.

See you in the next post, until I wish you successes in your creations ✨



He confeccionado mi publicación libre de IA. La imágen es de mi propiedad. El banner a sido editado en versión gratis de Canvas.





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