Hola, a mí particularmente no me gustan las historias de terror - debo reconocer que se debe a que me producen pesadillas y me cuesta dormir - pero me gustò tu cuento, muy bien escrito. Ademàs...el final no es lo que uno espera y esa es una de las cosas que màs me agradan de un relato: que el fina sea diferente al que pensaba que ocurrirìa. Gracias por compartir. Te deseo èxito en el concurso,

Hello, I don't particularly like horror stories - I must admit that it is because they give me nightmares and it is difficult for me to sleep - but I liked your story, very well written. Also...the ending is not what one expects and that is one of the things I like most about a story: that the ending is different from what I thought would happen. Thanks for sharing. I wish you success in the contest