RE: Aureolina could not bear his betrayal-The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #155

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This is a story that might be told in many marriages. When we love someone deeply, it is hard to believe they would betray us as Rafael betrayed Aureolina. It is amazing that so many years could go by and the affair was never discovered. One wonders why Rafael would marry Aureolina when he already had a mistress. Human nature is puzzling, and this story emphasizes that.

The are is strong here. Your characterization of Aurelino is well developed. In the end, we are prepared for the way her life works out. She is a person of great character and this sees her through as she raises her children.

Thank you for sharing this story with us, @rammargarita



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Thank you for commenting on my story. God bless you and have a happy day.

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