RE: The missing wristwatch
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hello @ubani. Going forward, please ensure that you proofread your stories and edit them to correct any spelling errors, punctuation, and basic grammar. There were several instances of repeated words or overlapped thoughts. Curation will always be impacted if this important step in the writing process is overlooked. I am also struggling to find how your story relates to the prompt. The way in which the ending is written makes any link feel a little tenuous.
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Thanks for your observations. I've taken note of them.