RE: From the Smoke Club to the Ridge, the Smoke Screen Unveils (Part 5) | 20 August, 2024 @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2470 | Prompt: one last bullet

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Although I haven't gone through all the previous chapters, the one I read plus this present chapter. The tension is built masterfully as Tracie fights for her life in the cave as she is trapped by the deranged Melvin. Also, the constant danger she encountered put me on edge.

I believe the unexpected appearance of Jordan at the end adds suspense to the plot overview. It is an interesting story.

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Thanks so much for taking the time to read my series @toluwanispecial. I appreciate it as a writer yourself. I was pleased to hear that you found the series interesting and it captured suspense. I was hoping for that result. I appreciate your engagement and support.

I've written in the Writers Club Community previously, but mostly tackle the freewrite prompts in the Freewriters Community.

Take care and have a good rest of your week.

!LADY

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