RE: From the Smoke Club to the Ridge, the Smoke Screen Unveils (Part 5) | 20 August, 2024 @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2470 | Prompt: one last bullet
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Wow, this was such a thrilling and intense read! I was on the edge of my seat the entire time, especially as you described Tracie's desperate attempts to escape and Melvin’s terrifying presence. The buildup of tension with the music, the eerie cave setting, and the unpredictable behavior of Melvin really added to the suspense. And that ending with Jordan suddenly reappearing—what a twist! I can't wait to see what happens next. You’ve done an incredible job keeping the reader hooked!
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Thanks so much for your lovely compliment for my fiction story @ultimatewrestlin. I'm pleased you took the time to stop by and read it. How thrilled I was to see that you enjoyed the suspense and tension in the cave scene. Yes, Melvin is a strange one indeed. And Jordan's appearance I hope is to help.
I'm almost to the end of the series. At the bottom of my post, I've listed the previous chapters in case you want to visit from the beginning, then let me know your thoughts.
Take care and have a good rest of your week. I appreciate your time, engagement, and support.
!LADY