REAL HIPHOP RAP BARZ "ETHEREAL PRESENCE" Original Gospel Hip Hop Song - Vibes Week 28

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"ETHEREAL PRESENCE" - Full Lyrics - By @Verbal-D

Shout Out to WLO on the Beats

@Verbal-D
Verse 1:
Almost flatlined with my Life Line!
Still thankful, not a chance that I might whine
Emotions heavy, if they're steady, it is like dying!
Unseen stains on my Heart like spillin' white wine...

I'mma Man, so it doesn't mean I like crying
But it happens, I'm a human, tell me I'm lying...
Lost Loved Ones, I'm hurt, in pain and I'm sighing
Dead bodies on the ground, chalked and outlined...

Cold world, it is freezing on the Outside
But some hearts are more frigid than the Alpines
Skeletons in closets relocated, they'll be down by
The riverside, underwater, 'til it all dries...

Ask Questions? They'll say that it's not wise!
You've gone missin', now you're family's asking all "WHY'S???"
They want Justice, that a Judge is sayin', "All rise..."
But Corruption overshadows governed law size!!!...

@Verbal-D
Verse 2:
I've faced demons, real life, I am not lying
Don't make your bed a DeathBed, in THAT, I'm not lying 🛏 !!
Never Go if God's sending you a Stop Sign... 🛑
Make prayer daily, Holy Spirit is the hotline... 📞

Hunt the Truth with the hunger of a Mountain Lion
Tribe of Judah, rival Pumas, with a crouched spine!
King of Kings, Lord of Lords, crown is not mine
Accepted Jesus Christ as my Savior, was about time!

Picked Brains 🧠 over Brawns 💪, I'm about Mind/mine
Gold reigns over Bronze, God'll outshine
Any false image, false idol or a proud Shrine ⛩
Take it all down, let it drown, river mouth Rhein...

The way I flow, let it go with a sound rhyme
You actin' funny 'round money? You a Clown/Mime
Stayin' quiet, greedy, evil, chasing clout kind...
Only one chance, live it Right, with no downtime!

People lurking, subtle serpents, open mouth wide...
Keep your circle ever smaller, gotta downsize
No more secrets, not a thing that a Hound finds
Keep on growin'! Cut away all the brown vines!

Don't get trapped, gridlocked like the Pound sign #
Never chase a dream without Passion or without tryin'
FIGHT DEPRESSION, keep it steppin', let your doubts hide
God made the heavens, so you're destined for a Cloud 9 🌥!!!

God has truly gifted me with the gift of music with which I gift back to you all, and I hope you can take something positive from it and get a glimpse into my soul with each new verse and song idea I release. All things are possible through Jesus Christ.
God bless you all, may He receive the glory.

Gospel Musician/Rapper/Singer/Songwriter & Official Vibes Judge
-@Verbal-D

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Good lyrics, good proposal.Bravo !!!

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Thank you so much maia, I really appreciate you stopping by, listening and giving great feedback. God bless you

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Cloud 9 is a heaven for the SAINT
Pureness and clean all white but not a single PAINT
We all should try and get in with our PASS WORK
Before the Angels getting grip to make use of the PADLOCKS

BLESS UP BOSS
MORE INSPIRATION SIR
THAT WAS 🔥💯

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God bless you man, thanks so much
Just putting out what I can to inspire you all
I know I need to hear this message too just like everyone else
Sometimes I feel like I am rap-preaching to myself lol
Because I know I need the truth and the wisdom and the understanding of God's love for us

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Bro you are amazing, that was a great original song bro, congratulations men

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Thank you very much, I am really glad you enjoyed the original, this one is definitely up there in my top favorite 20 songs from the 100+ songs I have, I don't even know the number of songs I have written. But I am grateful that I was inspired to write this one so quickly. The message is direct from my soul and spirit.

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I wish I could compose my own music, well done bro you are the best

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Drop me the address of your studio, I need to come for some coaching. I just love this rap, the sound is so sweet. True, we have had lots of pains, lost dear ones but only Jesus can heal our pains as he saves.

Thank you for bringing this good beat across, I had to listen more than once because it's so sweet

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Hahaha, I appreciate your comment and thanks for making me laugh. I am too busy to coach. So glad you enjoyed the rap and the important message is indeed that Jesus can heal all things we have endured. May He reside in all of us. God bless you

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Am happy I made you laugh this morning.... hahahaha, I understand even from your engagement on chain. Sure, Jesus can if we give him the space to. Amen, God bless you greatly too. I do wish you a blessed weekend ahead

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The Boss @verbal-d knows how to kill 'Em all 🔥 this is fire man and Full of Power!!! more than Hive Power, nice job Man!!!

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Thank you very much, I want to revive more than to kill, bring new life and revitalization into this section of music with the Gospel Message of Jesus Christ, Holy Spirit powered indeed. God bless you

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God made the heavens, so you're destined for a Cloud 9 🌥!!!

That Hits the Right spot 💯, the Word play is fire🔥,
Message passed is Clear 💯❤️
not telling you this because you are one of the Judge,
You are a good Rapper no Capping,
Hopefully this should motivate me to do my Rap for this week.
Well done sir.

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Yeah I love that line too, I felt like it was the perfect ending line that brings finality to the whole message. I appreciate you listening and vibing to this one bro. The Holy Spirit tells me what to write sometimes and I am grateful, all glory to the Most High for this gift of music.

I warn you though,

I judge rap entries extremely hard lol I don't play when it comes to hip hop. I hope your entry will be good.

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Wow!
For an original this hits hard
You’re a lyrical genius! And the delivery? Speechless!!!

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Appreciate your kind words man, I am always all about original music, no one will write my songs and I gotta use this gift for the Most High indeed, God bless you man

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These lines are deep and creative sir I must confess🙌

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Thank you very much for checking it out and appreciating the depth of them

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The lyrics are deep. You are so creating sir, indeed God has blessed you with the gift of music

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Thank you very much man, God bless you, yes He has gifted many of us with the gift of music in various ways and expressions.

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Ok! Ok!
This is a banger💯💯💯
You always bring it and you know,well done 👏

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Thank you very much Ben, gotta keep the standard levels high for hip hop, cause Vibes is lacking in that area of the community for the most part, with the exception of a literal handful of people. I appreciate you

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What a nice flow man! clever lyrics and a deep message within, i couldn´t stop bouncing my head up and down to the beat while listening to you shoot those fire bars!! wonderful demostration of skill both writing and performing,thanks for sharing! blessings of love abundance and peace brother.

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Heyyy that makes me smile man, thanks so much for the big compliments and kind words, so glad that you enjoyed this as much as I did creating and sharing it. God bless you bro

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Wahh ayer soñé que rapeaba así! :D Dios es bueno, honra para él eternamente 🌱🎶

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Thank you very much elison, I appreciate you, God bless you indeed

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Wow! That pitch is exquisite Sir, may be I'll try singing your line someday smiles.

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Thank you very much, I am glad to have found my cadence and tone a long time ago, I appreciate you

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Yo! @verbal-d this is fire bro! Your pen game transcends this realm!!! You executed those bars like a rap Lord!! "Make prayer daily, Holy Spirit is the hotline" this line hit hard!!!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Shout out to @wlo this beat is so lit bro!!!🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌❤❤❤❤

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I'm no Rap Lord bro, please don't call me that.
But thank you very much, glad you enjoyed the lyricism and flow. All glory to God and the HolySpirit definitely guides and inspired my pen game when writing lyrics, indeed indeed, wlo was so fresh on the beat.

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I like the line "King of kings, Lord of lords, crown is not mine. Accepted Jesus Christ as my savior was about time."

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That too is one of my favorite lines in that song, thanks for sharing what caught you the most. I love when people pick out lines that stood out to them.

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Exactly! It's amazing how one line can speak to someone on a deeper level. I'm glad we share the same appreciation for that song. Jesus Christ is all that we need. He is everything.

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What a cool composition you've shared here. I like your energy and flow. It was a pleasure to see your entry for this week. Best of success and blessings.
👏👏👏

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Thanks so much rosana, I appreciate you listening and for your support, I had to release that energy and that flow indeed. Much success and blessings to you too.

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Oohh, very good song, this is what I would listen to when I'm training, to my playlist 😎🫀

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Thank you very much for the big compliment, I gotta get more of my songs on spotify so I can pop up in people's playlists. Thanks for the reminder.

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Powerful lyrics,potent imagery,and a strong spiritual message make"Ethereal Presence"a standout track.Verbal-D's vulnerability and artistic skill shine through in this moving gospel hip-hop song.

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Thank you for the epic comment on this song. I appreciate you listening and showing support. I Thank God for this gift of music

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Your lyrics are always getting all my love. I love them because they always come from experience. You always tell so much in your lyrics and it speaks of God’s goodness upon you.

Thank you for sharing this with us, VerbalD. 🥰

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I appreciate always your comments and your attention to the detail of my music. You speak a lot of good to so many artists here in our community. Thank you for sharing your love and support. I don’t take it for granted

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It’s been a while but it’s always uplifting listening to you rap. 🤗

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Amazing sound and beautiful lyrics. Your flow was really sharp and on point. I enjoyed this song very much @verbal-d!

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Thank you so much bro kmichealson, this one was so fun to perform and I am happy with the result for sure. So glad you enjoyed this heat.

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This is so beautiful Sir Verbal-D 🥰❤️🥂

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Thank you very much prince keys, toast and cheers to more music and spiritual/lyrical growth

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Yeah am feeling the hip pop boss you're the best.

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Thank you for the kind words, I can only aim to be the best of myself, no one else will do it for me. God bless you

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Good composition. I congratulate you.

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Thank you very much marilui. Much appreciated for you listening and stopping by

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Deep lyrics!! Anything about God is always top notch

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Thank you very much, I’ve been a fan of deep lyrics since my preteen years. And I am blessed to be able to express at this artistic level and hopefully inspire people along the process. God is so good. God bless you

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Isaiah 6:6-8 NLT
[6] Then one of the seraphim flew to me with a burning coal he had taken from the altar with a pair of tongs. [7] He touched my lips with it and said, “See, this coal has touched your lips. Now your guilt is removed, and your sins are forgiven.” [8] Then I heard the Lord asking, “Whom should I send as a messenger to this people? Who will go for us?” I said, “Here I am. Send me.”

Hear me out everyone... 👆🏽 This is the reason why this man spits so much 🔥 to us 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

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That is a deep verse. Thank you so much for referencing the Word here. May the Holy Spirit continue to speak through me so that people are led correctly and not astray.

It makes me want to check what the KJV says in its translation because that is the version I read from since the past 14 years or so.

KJV Isaiah Ch 6: Verses 6-8
“Then flew one of the seraphims unto me, having a live coal in his hand, which he had taken with the tongs from off the altar:
7 And he laid it upon my mouth, and said, Lo, this hath touched thy lips; and thine iniquity is taken away, and thy sin purged.
8 Also I heard the voice of the Lord, saying, Whom shall I send, and who will go for us? Then said I, Here am I; send me.”

A powerful verse indeed. Reminds me of the other verse where God tells Moses that He will give him the words to speak to pharaoh, or the other verse regarding when we preach the gospel, we need not think about what to say because the Holy Spirit will provide us our speech.

God bless you

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Thank you sir... God continue use you in Jesus name

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Love you're style and your message bro. Thank you for this. This makes me want to rap. In fact, I'm going to make my entry into the contest because of this. Mind you, I don't write and I don't rap, but I did start "reading" Dr. Seuss when I was like 5. I won't melt faces and I won't win grammys, but I WILL hit you with something that rhymes (sort of).

Get ready for some one fish, two fish, red fish blue fish fire coming your way suckas!

Vibes: you've been warned.

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Big love thanks man. I appreciate you listening and vibing with me, glad it has inspired you to try a rap entry

Hahaha thanks for the laugh man.
Dr. Seuss is one of the best to do it.
I will be ready for your entry. The last time to enter in is tomorrow morning 10am Croatian time.

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Loved your barss D.
So powerfull

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Thank you very much suanet, appreciate you listening and showing support, bars all day

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This is phenomenal. Wow, just wow🤩🤩🤩

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Thank you very much bro. Truly appreciate you listening and checking it out.

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You nailed it! Awesome performance! Simply Outstanding!

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Thank you very much. I gave it my very all and held nothing back. Appreciate you listening, God bless you

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Don't get trapped, gridlocked like the Pound sign # Never chase a dream without Passion or without tryin' FIGHT DEPRESSION, keep it steppin', let your doubts hide God made the heavens, so you're destined for a Cloud 9 🌥!!!
🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥

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Appreciate you for posting this ending section. Let's make smores and a bbq to this fire lol

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