The Numbers Didn't Add Up | ZAPFIC MONDAY (3/11/24) | Prompt: dribble (regate)

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This week for the ZAPFIC Monday challenge, the prompt "dribble" presented the opportunity to address a pet peeve I have with faucets and other facilities in the home that drip water unnecessary. If left unattended, the problem can grow into an even larger one with inflated utility expenses. I present a flash fiction story related to this in the format created by @felt.buzz whereby the story is told in 240 characters or less.

My story is below:

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It hadn't rained for weeks. Unable to figure out the small stream gathering in the backyard, the Avery's lay in bed nights fretting over the sight, and ignored the steady drip behind the bathroom wall.

That is, until the water bill arrived.

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Esta semana, para el reto de los lunes de ZAPFIC, el tema "goteo" me brindó la oportunidad de abordar una manía que tengo con los grifos y otras instalaciones del hogar que gotean agua innecesariamente. Si no se atiende, el problema puede convertirse en uno aún mayor, con gastos de suministros inflados. Presento una historia de ficción flash relacionada con esto en el formato creado por @felt.buzz, según el cual la historia se cuenta en 240 caracteres o menos.

Mi historia está abajo:

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Los números no cuadraban

Hacía semanas que no llovía. Incapaces de descifrar el pequeño arroyo que se acumulaba en el patio trasero, los Avery pasaban las noches en la cama preocupados por lo que veían e ignoraban el goteo constante detrás de la pared del cuarto de baño.

Hasta que llegó la factura del agua.

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I leave here the screenshot evidencing the 240-character limit for my story for ZAPFIC Monday (3/11/24):

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If you'd like to participate, here's the official post:
Si quieres participar, aquí tienes el post oficial:

It's ZapFicMonday! Write me a story in 240 characters or less!

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RULES:
  • Post to the Freewriters Community.

  • Use #freewritehouse and #zapfic tags.

  • Please use a word/character counter (if you search for word counter on the internet or in your phone's app store you will get a big choice!) wordcounter.net and include a screenshot. This makes it easier for you and @feltbuzz!

  • Use the prompt provided as you see fit (use your imagination)

  • You have 3 days (until Thursday 23h59 GMT) to post a Zapfic (a story written in 240 characters or less) using the prompt given.

  • Try to tell a complete story if you can!

  • The story should only be 240 characters long (including spaces)

NORMAS:
  • Postear en la comunidad de Freewriters.

  • Usa las etiquetas #freewritehouse y #zapfic.

  • Por favor, utiliza un contador de palabras/caracteres (¡si buscas contador de palabras en internet o en la tienda de aplicaciones de tu teléfono tendrás una gran selección!) wordcounter.net e incluye una captura de pantalla. Así será más fácil para ti y para @feltbuzz.

  • Utiliza el texto como mejor te parezca (usa tu imaginación).

  • Dispones de 3 días (hasta el jueves a las 23h59 GMT) para publicar un Zapfic (una historia escrita en 240 caracteres o menos) utilizando el tema propuesto.

  • Intenta contar una historia completa si puedes.

  • La historia debe tener sólo 240 caracteres (espacios incluidos).

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Good luck everyone with whatever your endeavors.

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SOURCES:
a) JustClickindiva's Footer created in Canva utilizing its free background and images used with permission from discord admins.
b) Unless otherwise noted, all photos taken by me with my (i) Samsung Galaxy 10" Tablet, (ii) Samsung Phone, & (iii) FUJI FinePix S3380 - 14 Mega Pixels Digital Camera
c) Purple Butterfly part of purchased set of Spiritual Clip Art for my Personal Use
d) All Community logos, banners, page dividers used with permission of Discord Channel admins.
e) Ladies of Hive banner used with permission of and in accordance with the admin's guidelines
f) Thumbnail Image created by me in Canva.
g) "Flames." What is Apophysis 2.09. https://flam3.com/

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English is my native language.
If translation included, I use DeepL to assist my readers.
Thanks for your patience an understanding
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El inglés es mi lengua materna.
Si se incluye traducción, utilizo DeepL para ayudar a mis lectores.
Gracias por su paciencia y comprensión.

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Good one! Most annoying sound, and a regretable outcome.

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Yes, it certain is when you can't pinpoint it. I encountered this, and by the time we realized what was wrong, the entire bathroom wall had to be removed for water damage inside.

I don't know why I didn't act on that occasion since I'm the one who hears every sound there is in the house and urges hubby to run investigate. Inaction equals unnecessary and costly expense.

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The water bill jus have been a wake up call..Lol

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Yes, it was an expensive one. It's a reminder of the old adage, if you hear something...check it out!

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Such things are very special and expensive.

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