DISEMBODIED VISITORS [EN/ES]

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Since I was a child, I always associated my grandparents' attic with a mysterious place. I imagined that the room located in the highest part of the house, in the space formed by the gable roofs, was full of objects that would arouse my curiosity. The prohibition that we minors could not enter the place reinforced, in me, the idea that the attic was really an enigmatic place. Among the houses I visited, no other had a similar room.

When I was old enough to break the restriction, I discovered that the grandparents' attic only accumulated things they never wanted to get rid of after they lost their use value. Among the dust and clutter were missing the mysterious objects that fueled my childhood imagination. At least that's what I thought, until the day I found a DVD with the date of grandfather's disappearance written on the label in marker.

More than 20 years had passed since the day of the inexplicable disappearance. Grandpa left in the morning for his jewelry store, located in the old part of town. At lunchtime, Grandma was surprised not to see him arrive. He had not told her by phone that he would not be there, as was his custom, if there was any reason why he could not be there. When in the afternoon he was not in for tea time, she, personally, went to check what was going on. She found the store closed.

Police inquiries did not solve the case. They found no clues to point them in the right direction. The inventory of the jewelry store was complete. Only one fact caught the attention of the investigators in charge of the case. The recording from the store's security camera had disappeared, just after the day, when the grandfather left for the store and did not return.

Although I was just a teenager at the time, I could sense Grandma's resignation to what was happening. It seemed as if the rest of us in the family were more affected by Grandpa's disappearance. At the time, I chalked it up to the pragmatism with which she always approached issues related to life and death. The following Monday, she asked my dad to take care of the jewelry store, “the customers can't wait for your father to show up,” she told him with a conformism that I found disconcerting.

The day I found the DVD with the inscription of the memorable family date in the attic, I had come upstairs for some photos that Grandma asked me to find for her. It had been a long time since she had used the narrow staircase that led to the room at the top of the house. Searching through the small cardboard box containing the photos, I came across the disc that caught my attention. I complied with Grandma's request and put the DVD in my inside jacket pocket, anxious to unveil its contents.

The images shown by the old player I kept at home filled me with a disturbing uncertainty. The disc turned out to be a rewritable DVD used to record footage from the jewelry store's security camera. Judging by the date added, the recording began at the store's closing time, the day before Grandpa's disappearance.

Advancing the recording to the next morning, the camera recorded the grandfather's arrival at the time the store opened. Minutes later, the projection on the floor of two shadows entering the store could be distinguished. Nothing would have caught my attention, had I not noticed that the shadows were not projected by anybody. I rewound the film several times to make sure that those shadows were not really coming from customers interested in the merchandise sold by Grandpa.

But the biggest surprise still awaited me. About an hour after the two disembodied shadows entered the jewelry store, the footage showed three shadows leaving the store. The footage later on the DVD provided no information other than that of an empty store. After 5 p.m., when the grandmother entered the store, the recording was interrupted.

That night I could not get to sleep. I only wished for dawn to come to find the answer to what I had seen in the video. Grandma was surprised to see me arrive so early at her house. I left no room for preamble and went straight to the point, brandishing the disc with the date labeled on it in my hand, as irrefutable proof of what I was saying.

-Grandma, I would like to hear the explanation of the contents of this DVD and the reason you had for keeping it hidden all this time - I blurted out point-blank, paying attention to the expression on her face after my words.

To my astonishment, my grandmother's reaction showed that she had been waiting all that time for someone to ask her those questions.

-It's going to be a long story, so let's make ourselves comfortable - said Grandma as she invited me to join her for breakfast - I thought I would take this secret to my grave. I was always afraid they would think I was crazy.

She paused to savor the steaming coffee she had just poured.

-You were born eight years after your grandfather's death - she resumed the conversation in a very serene voice.

After those words, I was the one who was stunned, but that confession would turn out to be insignificant compared to what I would hear later. She told me that grandfather suffered from a heart disease that was incompatible with life. He was 44 years old when he was admitted to the hospital and died there.

-In the early hours of the morning of his death, while I was waiting outside the intensive care unit, some disembodied beings approached me - the grandmother continued - Heartbroken as I was, knowing the proximity of the tragic end that the man I loved so much would have, I did not receive them with surprise. I had asked so much for a miracle that I took them as the answer to my requests.

The visitors asked for his approval. One of them would use Grandfather's body to live among us. No one would notice any change, for Grandpa would continue to lead his usual life. The experiment would last for twenty Earth years. After that time, the others would return for him. He would regain his disembodied state, and no vestiges of the body used would remain.

-What you saw on the security camera footage - she said to me in anguish - was the return of the disembodied being to his world.

I never fully understood how Grandma was able to go on with her life from that day on, as if nothing extraordinary had happened. Her practical sense of life never ceased to teach me.

Versión en Español

LOS VISITANTES INCORPÓREOS


Desde pequeño siempre relacioné el desván de los abuelos con un lugar misterioso. Imaginaba que la habitación situada en la parte más alta de la casa, en el espacio que forman los techos a dos aguas, estaba repleta de objetos que despertarían mi curiosidad. La prohibición que existía de que los menores no podíamos entrar en el lugar reforzaba, en mí, la idea de que el desván era realmente un sitio enigmático. Entre las casas que visitaba, ninguna otra, tenía una habitación similar.

Cuando tuve edad suficiente para romper la restricción, descubrí que el desván de los abuelos solo acumulaba cosas de las que nunca quisieron deshacerse después que perdieran su valor de uso. Entre el polvo y el desorden faltaban los objetos misteriosos que alimentaron mi imaginación infantil. Al menos eso pensaba yo, hasta el día que encontré un DVD que tenía escrito en la etiqueta con marcador, la fecha en que desapareciera el abuelo.

Habían trascurrido más de 20 años desde el día de la inexplicable desaparición. El abuelo en la mañana salió para su joyería situada en la parte antigua de la ciudad. A la hora del almuerzo, a la abuela le extrañó no verlo llegar. Tampoco le había avisado por teléfono que no iría, como era su costumbre, si algún motivo se lo impedía. Cuando en la tarde no estuvo para la hora del té, ella, personalmente, fue a comprobar lo que estaba sucediendo. Encontró la tienda cerrada.

Las pesquisas policiales no dieron solución al caso. No encontraron pistas que les indicara un rumbo a seguir. El inventario de la joyería estaba completo. Solo un hecho llamó la atención de los investigadores encargados del caso. Había desaparecido la grabación de la cámara de seguridad del negocio, justo a partir del día, en que el abuelo salió para la tienda y no regresó.

Aunque entonces era solo un adolescente, pude notar la resignación de la abuela con lo que estaba sucediendo. Parecía como si a los demás miembros de la familia nos hubiese afectado más la desaparición del abuelo. En aquella época, lo achaqué al pragmatismo con que ella siempre abordaba los temas relacionados con la vida y la muerte. Al siguiente lunes, le pidió a mi papá que se ocupara de la joyería, “los clientes no pueden esperar a que aparezca tu padre”, le dijo con un conformismo que me resultó desconcertante.

El día que encontré el DVD con la inscripción de la memorable fecha familiar en el desván, había subido por unas fotos que la abuela me pidió le buscara. Ya hacía tiempo que ella no utilizaba la angosta escalera que llevaba hasta la habitación en lo más alto de la casa. Registrando en la pequeña caja de cartón que contenía las fotos, me topé con el disco que llamó mi atención. Cumplí el encargo de la abuela y me guardé en el bolsillo interno de la chaqueta el DVD, ansioso por develar su contenido.

Las imágenes mostradas por el viejo reproductor que guardaba en casa, me llenaron de una inquietante incertidumbre. El disco resultó ser un DVD regrabable utilizado para registrar el material que filmaba la cámara de seguridad de la joyería. A juzgar por la fecha que se añadía, la grabación comenzaba a la hora del cierre de la tienda, el día anterior, al de la desaparición del abuelo.

Avanzando la grabación hasta la mañana siguiente, la cámara registraba la llegada del abuelo a la hora en que abría la tienda. Minutos después se distinguía la proyección en el piso de dos sombras que entraban en el local. Nada hubiese llamado mi atención, de no advertir, que las sombras no eran proyectadas por cuerpo alguno. Retrocedí varias veces la filmación para asegurarme de que en realidad aquellas sombras no procedían de clientes interesados por la mercancía que vendía el abuelo.

Pero la mayor sorpresa me aguardaba aún. Aproximadamente una hora después de la entrada de las dos sombras sin cuerpos en la joyería, la grabación mostraba como tres sombras se retiraban del local. El material filmado después en el DVD no aportaba más información que la de una tienda vacía. Pasadas las 5 de la tarde, con la entrada de la abuela en la tienda, se interrumpía la grabación.

Esa noche no pude conciliar el sueño. Solo deseaba que llegara el amanecer para encontrar la respuesta de lo que había visto en el video. La abuela se sorprendió al verme llegar tan temprano a su casa. No dejé espacio para preámbulos y fui directo al grano, blandiendo el disco con la fecha rotulada en mi mano, como prueba irrefutable de lo que decía.

-Abuela, quisiera escuchar la explicación del contenido de este DVD y el motivo que tuviste para mantenerlo oculto durante todo este tiempo- le solté a quemarropa, poniendo atención en la expresión que mostraría su rostro después de mis palabras.

Para mi asombro, la reacción de mi abuela demostraba, que había esperado todo aquel tiempo, por alguien que le hiciera esas preguntas.

-Será una larga historia, así que pongámonos cómodo- dijo la abuela mientras me invitaba que la acompañara a desayunar- Llegué a pensar que me llevaría este secreto a la tumba. Siempre tuve el temor que me tomaran por loca.

Hizo una pausa para degustar el humeante café que se acababa de servir.

-Tú naciste 8 años después de la muerte de tu abuelo- reanudó la conversación con una voz muy serena.

Después de aquellas palabras fui yo quien quedó estupefacto, pero esa confesión resultaría insignificante en comparación con lo que escucharía después. Ella me contó que el abuelo padecía de una enfermedad cardiaca que resultaba incompatible con la vida. Tenía 44 años cuando ingresó al hospital y allí falleció.

-En la madrugada que ocurrió su muerte, mientras esperaba afuera de la unidad de terapia intensiva, se acercaron a mí unos seres sin cuerpos- continuó la abuela con su relato -Desconsolada como estaba, conociendo la proximidad del trágico final que tendría el hombre a quien tanto amaba, no los recibí con sorpresa. Había pedido tanto por un milagro que los tomé como la respuesta a mis súplicas.

Los visitantes le pidieron su aprobación. Uno de ellos utilizaría el cuerpo del abuelo para vivir entre nosotros. Nadie notaría cambio alguno, pues el abuelo seguiría llevando su vida habitual. El experimento se prolongaría por veinte años terrestres. Después de ese tiempo, los otros regresarían por él. Recuperaría su estado incorpóreo y no quedarían vestigios del cuerpo utilizado.

-Lo que vistes en la grabación de la cámara de seguridad – me dijo angustiada – fue el regreso del ser incorpóreo a su mundo.

Nunca entendí del todo como la abuela pudo seguir su vida a partir de aquel día, como si nada extraordinario hubiese pasado. Su sentido práctico de la vida no dejaba de aleccionarme.


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Escrito original en Español ✒️ Translated with DeepL.com (free version)
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You surprised me with this story. I thought of a criminal grandmother and then you surprise us with something fantastic. Very well narrated and with a plot that surprises. Excellent work.

Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Excellent day.

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It was logical to think of the grandmother's guilt, everything pointed to her. But no, she turned out to be a sweet granny 😉 as are almost all of them in real life 😁😁😁😁.

Thank you for your visit and stimulating comment, my friend 👍

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Wow, what a gripping story! The atmosphere you created is so eerie and compelling, and I love how the attic, a seemingly mundane place, becomes the catalyst for uncovering such a deep and unsettling family secret. The twist about the grandfather and the disembodied beings was completely unexpected and added an incredible layer to the narrative.

The way you portrayed the grandmother as both pragmatic and deeply affected by what happened really adds emotional depth. It's amazing how she lived with that secret for so long. The story kept me hooked from beginning to end, and I'm left wanting to know even more about those disembodied beings and their intentions.

Your writing style brings out the suspense perfectly, and the ending leaves readers with so many questions in the best way. I’d love to see more of this eerie world you've hinted at—maybe even more about how the grandmother dealt with the aftermath or about the origins of these beings. Great work!

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When I finished writing this story I knew there was content to develop other stories. Respecting the truth, all the ingredients of the plot served specifically when I was writing it. I had never thought of them before.

The grandmother was a character I really enjoyed writing. Her practical sense of life does not make her lose her sensitivity. Her decision was made out of love, otherwise she would lose her loved one very early on.

The secret is justified by society's incomprehension of what does not fit into the established canons. Who would believe her?

I enjoyed your commentary very much. The exchange of ideas that is created between the author and the reader is always enriching.

I will seriously think about returning to the theme and developing the subplots that allow it. Thank you for your suggestion.

Thank you very much for reading and many more for your comment. 👍

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