THE IMPRISONED LAGACY Dreem-WOTW S3 R1

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This isn't just a story, It's the foundation of the reality we live in. Many say it's a fairytale, others oppose it to be legendary, but I think it still exists and lives among us. This is the legend of Azik, the greatest warlord to have ever lived. You might not believe me, but sometimes I think he watches us from afar, up in the great mountain of Karisimbi. My grandma would tell us the tail over and over again, Oh I forgot to mention, Azik was the love of her life, but I guess it didn't end well for them since he had to pay the ultimate sacrifice.

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Long ago during the reign of the tyrant Emperor Gezo, a mighty warrior in his time. He fought to free Africa from the foreign slave master that colonized them, only to rule Africa and became worse than the colonial masters. He executed anyone who dared to question his order but was mostly feared because of his mastery of fire and thunder There are very few warriors with the ability to control at least an element, it was always a thing of Joy watching the warriors display their skill and mastery of these elements.

Controlling at least an element was the height every soldier hoped to reach in training, but in order to do so, the soldier must learn to control his own spirit which they say is the highest level of self-discipline. I don't know how they do that, but every soldier who can do so becomes almost invincible or should I say super human.

Back to the story, After Emperor Gezo had librated Africa, he went ahead to eliminate every possible threat that could oppose his reign. He was the commander of the unsolid, army that conquered the colonial masters. But soon disbanded the army and ensured that any soldier that possessed the ability to control an element ceased to exist. He also went after the families of those soldiers, as well as those who had reached the stage of spirit mastery.

Controlling elements is often hereditary, but useless unless sharpened with training. After King Gezo had made an end to all his threats, there arouse a boy named Azik, a cupbearer to the emperor. Azik was born out of the pain of fallen soldiers as his both parents passed away during Emperor Gezo's assassination of the unsolid of which his both parents were a part. Azik's father was deputy Commander to King Gezo, a mighty warrior with the ability to control Air which was often seen as a rare mutation coming from a lineage that could only control ether.

Ether controllers are a very rare specie, not more than three in a generation, with the unique ability to control the clouds and adapt to all other elements. Their blood was the bridge if ever a pure human needed to acquire powers to control any other element. Azik's mother was from a small tribe that only controlled water, and she was known as the warrior of the water tribe. His birth happened shortly after his pregnant mother was speared to the heart, only for her to use what was left of her strength to push forth her son to life. The baby was carried and catered for by one of the maids who survived and that was how he was raised as a pure human.

I will like to continue the story of Azik, But it's already bedtime and you kids have to go to bed.

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A bed time story. How nice. I haven't had one in quite a few decades. Thanks. 😍😁😁

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So is there a part two? Tag me if there is. This is quite the story. Realistic and historical with the fiction all in one. Reminds me of Moses and Pharaoh. What a combo. Well done.

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Thank you, I will be sure to tag you.

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I admire your story telling skill. This is a fiction, I suppose but it is well thought-out and put together . I noticed the elements were used appropriately too. You must be good in literature. Weldone

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On the contrary, this was written in a rush... and the last time I came across literature was in junior secondary school... lol

However, I love telling stories, it comes naturally to me. I'm planning to nurture my storytelling skills so I can become a better writer

Thank's for your kind words, I'm glad you liked the story

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Now, I believe there should be another part. Tag me in if there's. I would love to know how Azik will master all the elements and fight.

Hello, dearest dreemer. I hope you are well. Hehe, it is Wednesday. Another day to let your smile flow like a river. I waltzed in from #dreemport for I am an amazing #dreemer. An awesomely made #dreemerforlife.

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Awesomeness hehe...
I..was already enjoying every bit of it before you said it's bedtime. Who said I was feeling sleepy huh??...please Tage me in part two cause this looks like a pinch of history and fiction maybe historicfic🤭

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Sure I will... Yes it's historific... I'm glad you liked It

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A dying mother pushing forth her baby with the last strength in her?? That's super amazing 😍. A mother's love is priceless.

So, Emperor Gezo made the people to think he was fighting for their sake, only to rule them more than the devil. I wouldn't mind calling him a bastard.
I enjoyed every bit of your story.

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I never even saw it from the mother's perspective until you mentioned it. I'm glad you liked it, thanks for stopping by.

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It's unfortunate she left the story on suspense, what happened afterward is what we are itchy to hear.
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If only you knew how the suspense came about, you will laugh out loud

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Lol. You got hooked up?

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I was battling with time, and just pouring out what I thought was nonsense just so I could meet up with submission deadline.

I hadn't even written what I intended, so I just decided to make it a bed time story out of improtu with five minutes left for submission

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I wonder why most leaders are evil minded, imagine wiping others out just keep ruling. He forgot that one day he would also die..

I hope you would continue the story another time.. 🥰🥰

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Ability to control ones' spirit is the greatest strength of all. Bible says the same thing.

Not just soldiers, much strength lies within a man who can control his spirit.

It's common to have people become the very evil they fought to overcome. I hope the Azik of today's society wouldn't also become evil after overthrowing evil Kingdoms.

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Important point there. let's see where the story leads

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A wonderful concept and storyline developing here. When writing any piece of fiction remember to maintain a balance between narrative, action, and dialogue to progress the story and plot, and give the reader at least one character to identify with and fall in love with so that they feel invested in the story. I actually love that this is being told as a bedtime story to the next generation. Would love to see how this progresses @kilvnrex. !PIZZA !ALIVE

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