RE: Fiction: Full speed ahead (A toda velocidad)[EN/ES]
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Good job showing us a distinctive character, in the way that Hakinen not only had to beat his rival, but do it in a showy and decisive manner. I also think the track announcer works well as a device; it allows you to show more of the race in a compact manner, and helps those who don't know racing by giving you a plausible reason to explain things clearly for us.
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