RE: 13 March 2025, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt - Part 2 Conclusion (Day 2674) | Prompt: art of lying (el arte de mentir)

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I knew the concluding part would be memorable! 😄 I applaud Rosalind for exposing Freeman's infidelities with a bold and dramatic show and right at their anniversary party. The meticulous planning makes her revenge all the more satisfying!

As the slides were playing, I wondered when Freeman would put on his own show and predictably, he resorted to denial even in the face of concrete proof. You capture it well here—

....demeanor switched to gaslight mode as he attempted to weave a tangled web.

This is often the response that naturally comes to a disloyal person. An enjoyable read with a satisfying end! Well done. Take care and have a great day! ✨
!PIMP



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I was hoping for that exact reaction from my readers @kemmyb. I'm pleased to hear you found it to be memorable. I wanted something different from the victim to ensure that all who attended the wedding anniversary party would never forget. Hopefully, if any male in attendance was involved in a similar situation, they'd take note. Sadly, males are predictable. They read from the same book of denial, first, second, and last. And we shouldn't believe our lying eyes.

When I think of actual situations I've known personally and heard of over the years, it saddens me to think a person could treat another with such lack of disrespect and dishonesty and still feel entitled to be a part of any relationship. Such is human nature.

Not everyone has the resources to uncover another person's deceit. It's often swept under the rug with no proof. An endless cycle of gaslighting in all its disgusting forms.

Thanks for your visit and thoughtful analysis of the characters. I appreciate it as always and glad you enjoyed the story. Until next time, take care and have a good rest of your week.

!LADY

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