RE: 19 February, 2025 @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2652 | Prompt: a date (a fecha) **[FINISH MY STORY CHALLENGE]**
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Hello @alonicus. Now you know you're an excellent writer and thinker, and any story you tackle will be a masterpiece, in my opinion! You are right, you're good at world ending scenarios, and this piece proves it. I love the details of the pilot which I hadn't explored yet. Your clip opens up an entire new chapter.
Humans don't realize the harmful impact we do to our planet may affect other worlds as though we're the only ones in the universe. Your wonderful but chilling story line gives us a glimpse.
Thanks so much for participating. I truly appreciate it and love how you opened my mind to think outside of only what I can see. Take care and have a good start to your weekend.
!LADY
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Thank you ! Hopefully it's got something you can use 😀
Being the sad anorak I am, when I Googled what happened in 1972, it gave me the answer that they added a leap-second to the calendar. I suspect that's not necessarily what you had in mind as a way to create 31st June ! Admittedly having that change how we related to a mirror universe is a stretch, but hey, it's fiction ! I also looked up how much energy is released if a human mass of anti-matter gets annihilated, and it came out to around 100 times the energy of the Tsar Bomba (although nowhere near the Chixhulub impact).
I'm really looking forward to seeing the "real" ending of the story... I have a feeling it's get enough in it to go for several more full-length posts, and I'd love to see the real significance of that date 😀
More than that. I love the dialogue and explanations. You're the best. Thanks so much, and I hope the finale after a few more chapters doesn't disappoint.
Take care.
!LADY